tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post7291071827364272985..comments2023-06-25T04:31:45.767-04:00Comments on The Writer's Hollow: 3rd Annual No Kiss Blogfest!!Hayley Lovellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-77966140901732096682012-01-09T16:31:15.483-05:002012-01-09T16:31:15.483-05:00Ooh! I want to know what happens next. :)
So sad ...Ooh! I want to know what happens next. :)<br /><br />So sad I missed the No-Kiss Blogfest this year. I always love it so.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13380826220166366026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-37541523730348420572012-01-04T22:52:17.989-05:002012-01-04T22:52:17.989-05:00Ooh.. great tension and a surprise ending! Awesom...Ooh.. great tension and a surprise ending! Awesome job :)WritingNuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16326756274887055685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-13249012125045103702012-01-04T01:34:11.967-05:002012-01-04T01:34:11.967-05:00I didn't expect that at the end. I don't b...I didn't expect that at the end. I don't blame her for pulling away, although I wish the kiss happened.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-40561108848253774352012-01-03T13:19:59.112-05:002012-01-03T13:19:59.112-05:00Very interesting. I did find the switch in perspec...Very interesting. I did find the switch in perspective to be quite jarring, though.1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-38985016045827722992012-01-02T21:56:43.114-05:002012-01-02T21:56:43.114-05:00Murder makes romance a bit hard, especially if the...Murder makes romance a bit hard, especially if these are teenagers. <br /><br />Poor girl.<br /><br />Then again she might take the icepick option (20 pts if you get the reference).<br /><br />I did like the whole fireworks on the rooftop bit. A nice contrasts to the characters emotional turmoil.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-45144690882518601032012-01-02T20:13:05.223-05:002012-01-02T20:13:05.223-05:00I wonder how her and Mike came to be traveling tog...I wonder how her and Mike came to be traveling together. Such a tough situation. I hope she proves her brother's innocence and finds out that Mike is more understanding than she gives him credit for.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-48586601940311909262012-01-02T16:08:52.201-05:002012-01-02T16:08:52.201-05:00I really liked the way you set the scene on the ro...I really liked the way you set the scene on the roof, and you sure gave her an impossible situation. Well done.Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-68609591166498834582012-01-02T15:19:01.388-05:002012-01-02T15:19:01.388-05:00Oh wow. I love the big reveal at the end, and all ...Oh wow. I love the big reveal at the end, and all the tension leading up to it. So engrossing.Loralie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-27743202650303385902012-01-02T13:38:27.259-05:002012-01-02T13:38:27.259-05:00Aw! Great tension!Aw! Great tension!Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-46200763371973416932012-01-02T12:43:36.394-05:002012-01-02T12:43:36.394-05:00Oooh lots of tension and intrigue...I really liked...Oooh lots of tension and intrigue...I really liked it. Thank you so much for posting!Frankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6592855109697084661.post-34051480842408112572012-01-02T12:08:16.645-05:002012-01-02T12:08:16.645-05:00Ohh. That added tension and conflict of Mike think...Ohh. That added tension and conflict of Mike thinking her brother killed his sister is an interesting twist!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.com